Monday, September 3, 2007

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This week's notable first line:

"Will Scarlet hated trees."

Carrie Lofty, 'Redeeming Will Scarlet'

This first line has a number of things going for it: brief, unequivocal, and deceptively unremarkable until one makes the connection between the the subject and the place he spent much of his time (Sherwood Forest).

Altogether, a brilliant first line.

5 comments:

Carrie Lofty said...

Thx sweetie :)

Wylie Kinson said...

Brilliant first line! Running off to buy book...

Unknown said...

That sounds like a very cool book. I love Robin Hood stories. :)

Carrie Lofty said...

Sorry, ladies. I'm not in print yet. But I'll track you down when I am :)

M. said...

FOLLOW-UP NEWSFLASH!

Carrie just announced the sale of 'Redeeming Will Scarlett' to Kensington! Will sebut with Zebra in September of next year!